The bravest and the best of the geats, Beowulf!
Beowulf sailed over the sea to save Hrothgar from slicky Grendel
Hrothgar's men live happy in his hall while singing some songs
Darkness dropped, Grendel drips in his enemy's blood, delighted
Distance was the safety; only survivors, but can't see when they sleep
So Beowulf arose with his men around him
Planning how to defeat the fiend
Now help was needed
Beowulf's bravery brought him and Grendel together
Grendel tugged tight to Beowulf, with his large talons
Both battlings on Herots big walls
The man, Beowulf, meant to hold the monster till it's life leaped out
The monster flight, fastened his claws
Beowulf grabbed Grendel's arm
Snap! Muscle and bone split and broke, Grendel was now Defeated.
Beowulf sailed over the sea to save Hrothgar from slicky Grendel
Hrothgar's men live happy in his hall while singing some songs
Darkness dropped, Grendel drips in his enemy's blood, delighted
Distance was the safety; only survivors, but can't see when they sleep
So Beowulf arose with his men around him
Planning how to defeat the fiend
Now help was needed
Beowulf's bravery brought him and Grendel together
Grendel tugged tight to Beowulf, with his large talons
Both battlings on Herots big walls
The man, Beowulf, meant to hold the monster till it's life leaped out
The monster flight, fastened his claws
Beowulf grabbed Grendel's arm
Snap! Muscle and bone split and broke, Grendel was now Defeated.
11 comments:
Hey well i think your poem is pretty kool.i like the expresion on the poem!
you had 15 lines.
you also used alliteration.
to jessica^^: naww you think?
lmao haha just kiddin, anyways dude sexyass poem, i like how the lines you used related to the story like O_O'
anyways keep up with this stuff man, you can write poems like xDD
okay illeave you alone now, peace out jo!
nice i like it ur poem waz unique too but u mispell one word by the end
hey yo! i like ur poem is koo
i also like how u used words 2
exprese emotion. its sound good kep up the good work yo!
YOU HAVE A GOOD NICE POEM. IT WAS A UNIQUE LOL. I REALLY ENJOYED UR POEM.
H3Y PAULi3 U DiD A G00D J0B iN UR P03M. L0V3 iT! U SH0W3D TH3 BRAV3RY 0F B30WULF iN THiS P03M. W3LL D0N3!
Alot of ppl used dat same 1st line. Awsome job!
I LIKE UR POEM U DID. I THINK ITS REALLY COOL HOPE U COMMENT BACK LATERZ.NAENAE
hey paul,
i really like poem it's really unike.
poy you snapt, i like you poem, i mean it better than mine hey can you please comment me?
UUUUUUUUU snapped withe the pictures they look pretty cool yup yup well nice poem could do better lol j/k good job paulie keep up the good work..lol...GO CUBS
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